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I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss McClelland. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Thursday, June 11, 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
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Hi Tyrese,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your fantastic writing. I love that your first sentence really hooked me into your writing. You have started your sentences with some great recount words like first, then, after that and finally. Next time, it would be a good ideas to check that you have capital letters after your full stops.
Mrs McIntyre