I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss McClelland. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Tuesday, June 2, 2020
My first blog post!
Hi readers and welcome to my first blog post. I have posted my talking lion writing to share. Itś name is Alex. Please leave some comments on my work.
6 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
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ReplyDeletehi there tyrese that looks so cool you can work on making the
ReplyDeletepitcher piger
hi its me victor! i like your lon and its SO cool i wish you add more...well its good so i cant say your bad bye!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Tyrese,
ReplyDeleteNice work on your writing. I am guessing this is some kind of brainstorm for a bigger story? You have some great information in here. What made you pick a Lion?
- Miss Morgan
because it is off Madagascar
Deletehi tyrese
ReplyDeletei like how you put thing for your lion