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Thursday, June 11, 2020

my first bug hunt

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  1. Hi Tyrese,
    Thank you for sharing your fantastic writing. I love that your first sentence really hooked me into your writing. You have started your sentences with some great recount words like first, then, after that and finally. Next time, it would be a good ideas to check that you have capital letters after your full stops.
    Mrs McIntyre

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