Hello my name is tyrese i been learning cinquain poem please eave a comment.
I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss McClelland. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Wednesday, May 19, 2021
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Hi Tyrese, This is a nice Cinquain poem about the Anzac soldiers.This is really interesting how these rime. This reminds me of my Anzac poem that I made.Next time you should write your name with capital letters and the same with when you say I.
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